Next Generation Kids: Fast Changing Priorities

While walking, I keep my eyes and ears open. I have not attainment faculty where I can shun hearing what is bad. Normally in my morning walk I keep chanting some slokas.

I was walking alone. From a distance I found a group of kids-boys and girls of age below or around ten years sitting in circle in the ground of the park in Sector 40. I could hear distinctly a girl asking a boy, “Do you have a girlfriend? Don’t you love her? Tell truthfully. sach sach bolna?” We have been asking similar questions to Keshav and Svanik sometimes jokingly for fun. Anad even narrates about one and half years Zach how he goes after the girls.

But somehow I got serious after hearing the stray talk of the kids. Most of them were from the housings for low-income group attached to the park. I started pondering over why the kids today have gone to that extent. Why couldn’t they talk about the subject taught or other things happening all around? Is it the effect of the TV and cinema culture?

I don’t know how we shall react if we hear Keshav, Anvita, Svanik or Emma asking similar questions today?

I came out with my observations few minutes ago with Popli when he joined me. He did also feel bad and kept on the poor and irrelevant programmes on hundreds of TV channels.

Should I consider my worry as one from the old men who don’t anything else to do or does it carry any lessons for parents and intellectuals who can change the situation as long term social evils cropping up?

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Album and Autobiography-5

The fond memories of childhood in my village keep me happy in my solitude. Recently, I discovered that I have with me the photograph of the place rather the room where I was born. Basically that room was very auspicious so was used for the delivery for all the children before and even after me before the final division in the family. The photograph is a typical of a courtyard of a house in a village. One can see the rural old rice making appliance (Dhenki/ka) that used to make rice from paddy. I have seen the appliance extensively in use with singing women folks working for dehusking the paddy till rice mills arrived. It must have been a tiring exercise for their legs.

My family house had four courtyards and the roofs all over were covered with khaprel and naria (baked rural terracotta tiles). The southernmost was for male and the cattle. At one time, we had some 10 bullocks, two-three buffaloes and one very good horse. I remember some of bullocks had some unique identities based on places from where they came. Horse came in the house after a generation and continued for some years. Actually the first one came as a dowry from my maternal uncle Late Ramakant Rai, the brother-in-law of Nand Kishore chacha of village Ladui, and the next village in south of our village. In the evening in summer, after the sprinkling of water drawn from the well in the corner and all the cattle in their places, the courtyard presented a great scene. I still get reminded of some persons who might not have survived by now who used to entertain us all with some unique magic, enchanting stories and local songs. In evening many from among the villagers used to come for social get together. I still remember the evening when I requested my grandfather to ask ‘Pahalwan Sahab’ Rajneti Rai, the senior to show us some trick. Interestingly, he complied. He enquired Radhika Rai if he has some pure silver coins in his pocket. Naturally Radhika Rai was bewildered to hear that. But on search, one of my uncles found five old silver coins in his pocket. I don’t know how he did it. Was it a trick or some special power that he had developed? But as the story used to be, Rajneti Rai has a spirit under his control who does everything that he wishes.

The place now look totally changed as shown in photograph below that is now owned by my youngest uncle and his family.

I have some real good memories of earlier years. There was a very old well in the compound and there was no gate. One night, when we were sleeping, there was loud noise and we found the bricked wall of the well had collapsed. Jamuna baba got the new well in one corner. When we got the horse, a place for it was created where earlier the well existed.

The next courtyard was one for cattle and cattle feed. However, there was a room in one corner with a sub-room in it. My great grandmother told me that it was of the grandfather of my grandfather. He lived a very long life and that too lavishly. The room was having few chests with all types of papers, old books, court documents and perhaps some souvenirs. I used to sneak into it in my childhood and used to look at the papers. I had not developed the knowledge to understand and interest about preserving things of family history for posterity. And all those got thrown in absence of a good appreciator. I really feel sorry for it. But I do also remember the extra care by Jamuna baba, when the portion was getting demolished to construct a new one according to his plan. He expected some hidden treasures to appear from the wall or the floor, as the old persons kept their savings that way without telling anyone. Alas! Nothing came out to make him financially affluent too.

On the eastside of the third court yard was a long two-storied hall with three-four good beds (mostly received in dowry) and just two small windows where all of us the male members used to sleep. The mud wall was almost three-four feet in width that kept the place pretty comfortable even in hot summer.

The third courtyard was for the ladies with the fourth one as vacant with some trees of pomegranate and a lemon. The photograph above is from the third courtyard. It had a small platform in the middle that was worshipped as place of Lord Shiva. The family used the place during marriage or for any religious function such as Satya Narayan Puja as one we were having in the photograph when we visited Pipra with Yamuna and newly born Rakesh for the first time in 1968 while I was working in Hindustan Motors.


Satya Narayan Puja near Shiv Baba chabutara in main courtyard, 1968.
I was born in the room at the corner on August 14, 1939

There are many memories of the places around our family house that keeps me wondering if I could have photographed all the corners of the house.

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Why Doesn’t India Learn to Face Challenge?

Education now is a fundamental right for the children of 6-14 years of age in India. April 1, 2010 came with the landmark notification and became certainly historic. Should not every feel proud for it?

I was surprised to see the pictures of the schools on TV channels. In all the frames, the children were sitting on floor. Years ago I found the similar way of sitting in the government of the Agahpur School in Sector 41 where we live. It is the same Noida where almost every sector has one big private school with the world class facilities and many with air-conditioned classes. Why the TV channels didn’t show even one shot of these modern schools?

Unfortunately, everyone talks of the challenges for the effective implementation of the Act. The Act must end up with quality education for all.

The challenges are many:

India needs 5 lakh or more teachers across government schools, mostly in rural India. It is when teacher- students’ ratio is agreed at 1:30. For better teaching the ratio should be lower.

The teachers require to be properly trained, as only 40% of the present teachers are trained. The government till dates has hardly strategy and clear budgetary provisions for training teachers.

There are shortage of schools and classrooms.

Where are those neighbourhood schools and who will establish them?

The schools badly lack even the basic facilities related to infrastructure. According to the 2008-09 District Information System for Education report on elementary education in India, ‘of the 1.29 million government and private schools covered, over 60 per cent did not have electricity; 46.4 per cent did not have toilets for girls and almost 50 per cent did not have boundary walls to ensure the safety of students. For example, Uttar Pradesh needs to construct 100,000 rooms to satisfy the norms laid down by the RTE Act.’

The big private schools are to agree to admit 25% of the students from deprived class.

Small private schools need recognition as well as financial assistance.

And finally it is not easy to arrange the huge fund to the tune of Rs 171,000 crore required to make the Act work. As per earlier estimate by the then National Institute of Education Planning and Administration, the requirement was at a minimum of Rs 3,21,196 crore to a maximum Rs 4,36,458.5 crore over six years.

The human resource development ministry has estimated a requirement of about Rs 34,000 crore every year for a period of five years but has set aside Rs 15,000 crore for 2010-11. How will the gap be bridged?

I wish all those who matter in implementing the Act would have come out with solutions rather than the questions and doubts about its getting effectively implemented. I feel for every challenge there can be new innovative ways to overcome it to make the Act work.

Here are some:

The rural schools can informally use retired teachers and others interested on line of ‘Teach India’ Project of Times of India for complimenting the existing teaching staffs-regular and/ or Shikshamitra.

Trained teachers may use affordable and effective audio and video gadgets to supplement and ease their tasks.

The School Management Committees may be allowed to collect donations in cash and kind such as NREGA for building and improvement of infrastructure facilities in schools from all the legal sources including alumni.

The schools and teachers may go for the second shift wherever possible and practical. Media can also help. In Japan, the workforce got educated through radio about quality.

Why should the education ministers of MP or West Bengal or even the reputed educationists only complain about lack of infrastructure instead of suggesting and innovative ways and means to make the Act succeed?

Will media, particularly digital media participate in educating India instead of propagating damaging values through silly imagery?

Let all the stakeholders contribute to get the Act implemented. Let the members of School Management Committee in which parents will be in majority play positive role and don’t shirk with their responsibility.

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Celebrate India, Celebrate

Let the country celebrate. Education is a fundamental right of every child from today. Education will be free and compulsory too. The Prime Minister will address the nation on this day. I wish all the chief ministers would have also addressed the people of their state in their languages and appealed them to participate to make it effective.

It will be binding on the part of local and State Governments to ensure that all children in the six to 14 years age group get schooling. Almost 22 crore children fall under this age group. According to India’s Education for All Mid-Decade Assessment, in just five years between 2000 and 2005, the country increased primary school enrollment by 13.7 per cent overall and by 19.8 per cent for girls, reaching close to universal enrollment in Grade 1. However, still one in four children in 2005 left school before reaching Grade 5 and almost half before reaching Grade 8. The litmus test will be to bring the drop out to zero level.

Private educational institutions will have to reserve 25 per cent seats for children from weaker sections.

Expectations are high. It expects to improve the quality of education. It expects teachers to improve.

It is now mandatory for every single school to acquire a certificate of recognition after complying with norms and standards specified in the act. A school will function for five-six hours a day, and will have at least one teacher for every 30 children. (I strongly opine that for a good education, the number of teachers must be at least double) The children have access to textbooks and learning material, and will also get a mid-day meal.

I dream a positive transformation in the schools of the villages like Pipra, Madhukarpur, and Bodarhi and lakhs others in different villages of India. I do also hope that the education in the government schools at Noida’s integrated villages such as Agahpur, Morna, Nithari and Hosiarpur will gradually improve and will be similar to that of its many private schools.

But as expected, unless the parents appreciate the role of education and demand it from the teachers and the government, the act will not mean much. Further, many things must get added to the activities of these schools with limited means to make the act successful. The people, agencies, and local bodies must participate by getting the school premises protected, by getting a library and creativity centre built in the premises, and arranging a regular health checks through volunteer doctors. Let there be more and more competitions organized between the schools of a locality. Will the rich private schools allow the students of the government schools to participate in the sports and other extracurricular activities?

It requires a change of mindset. Unfortunately, there still remain many barriers to be crossed. Let the Kasis and Devis (of NDTV-Imagine) be not stopped from getting education and all those doing it must be behind bars.

Can we expect a 100 % educated nation soon or in a generation?

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Higher Education and Technology

While speaking in the ‘Session on Human Resources: The Future of Education’ in ‘India Today Conclave 2010’, Kapil Sibal had a technical solution to get over the problem of the shortage of teachers in rural schools. According to Mr. Sibal, ‘the broadband facility will happen in the next three years and the last mile connectivity through wireless too that can ensure lots of education programmes to reach children, even without teachers, if the need arises.’

Cisco’s chairman John Chambers also propounded the idea. Chambers conceived that a virtual learning revolution could take education to every Indian for a dollar a month. Chambers cautioned, “Don’t model the education system on the past, model for where it is going.”

Is it only a wishful thinking?

Some private company such as Educomp Solutions instead of setting up of the profitable business of coaching institutes for facilitating the entrance in IITs and IIMs must get into the business of providing the teaching material with help of IITs for all the private engineering colleges of the country that really lack good teachers.

I wish Kapil Sibal encourages and ensures the use of technologies first and almost immediately in all ready running private professional colleges that can be possible with a little thrust from the government.

Unfortunately, Kapil Sibal wants to do many things and bring about the transformation of the education system and sector of India. Mr. Sibal must focus on some and get them executed. And the use of technology in thousands of private engineering colleges is that one requires Mr. Sibal’s personal attention.

As reported, IITs have already readied the courses of many branches of engineering videoed that can be used for simultaneous teaching in many locations. Why IITs can’t be given the responsibility of the distance teaching in thousands of private engineering colleges of the country. It will bring certain amount of equity in accessibility of knowledge of engineering subjects.

Will Sibal be able to concentrate on the execution of this aspect of improving the quality standard of teaching from the private engineering colleges?

According to Mr. Sibal, India will need at least 800 more universities and another 35,000 colleges in the next ten years to increase the percentage of students going for higher education from the present 12.4% in the country to 30%. Will it not be prudent to work on improving the quality of the education on priority that can be done through technology for the India’s 480 universities and about 22,000 colleges today? Many entrepreneurs have already started taking steps. for example, iProf is one, which is a 7 inch touch screen tablet, that comes bundled with content from premier education institutes and has been launched at a price of INR.14900/- . And the application of technologies in education sector will expand fast in coming years.

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Album and Autobiography-4

Pipra, my village in police station Karahgar in district Rohtas (part of the old district Shahabad, as we knew it then) is known as Mardan Rai ka Pipra. It was also identified by many as Pipra of Jamuna Rai, when he was alive and active. Jamuna Rai was the younger brother of my grandfather, Lakshmi Prasad Rai. As my grandfather left the village for Bengal just after his schooling in search of employment, Jamuna baba managed the family land and cultivation starting at very early age right after his father’s death. He was soft spoken and very generous. He loved me a lot. Jamuna baba had two sons and daughter. The eldest was late Mukteswar Rai who lived with my grandfather at Birlapur, got schooling and worked there till end. His son Pradeep still works with one of the division of Birla Corporation

I remember some uniqueness of Jamuna baba. He never went and sat with any other persons in the village. In morning after milking the buffaloes, he would leave our house at Pipra and go straight for Rampur, the next village where we had the major landholdings and a house. I found him responding to any sound in the night or whenever I got up to go out for urinal. I wondered if he at all slept. He was early riser too. We never saw him on his bed after we got up in the morning. He used to go out in the fields for defecation as was the practice in rural India in those days, but no one in the village had seen him going.

I found in my childhood Jamuna baba as the most respected person in the villages all around and sometimes beyond too. Every night we used to see quite a few unknown guests from distant villages taking shelter at our place and getting bed and food. The story of hosting and feeding the whole marriage party going to a nearby village on a hot summer afternoon became famous as legend for his mannerliness. Once Mangla Rai, the famous wrestler of Joga in eastern UP came for marriage of his son in a nearby village. The name of Jamuna baba was so well-known in those days that he called only baba in his tent and met him. I had seen baba sending gift to Mangla Rai, as he started getting invitations from Magla Rai after the meeting.

Baba never wanted to seek any favour from others in the village. In those days in crop time, there used to be a lot of feuds for sharing the water of the canal for irrigation. He bought or exchanged his land, got trenches dug in such a way that he could take water to his fields without asking anyone’s favour. The family had lot of landholdings spreading in at least three villages from south of Pipra to Rampur at the centre and extending up to Pipri, covering about 4-5 kilometers, even after the abolition of zamindari system in 1952. Ours was a peaceful joint family but for his wife. He himself was pretty shore about it. He loved my uncles as they lived in the village with him. His own son, Mukterwar chacha was living with my grandfather for schooling. It was he who arranged and negotiated marriages of all my uncles. My grandfather never interfered with him. And Jamuna baba had immense love and respect for his brother. Unfortunately, few years after the death of my grandfather in 1965, Jamuna baba got the family divided because of his younger son. My youngest Uncle Nand Kishore ji was looking after the affairs at that time. I feel he would not have agreed for that during his life time.

Unfortunately because of the poor yield and very low prices of the produce, our farming was never making much money. None of the family members really worked but for supervision as per the prevalent practice in those days. Expenses were totally uncontrolled. Jamuna baba kept on selling some land. Ultimately that became the shore point and the charge of running the affair was given in younger hand of my uncle, Nand Kishore chacha. But that led to division soon.

I remember vividly the way Jamuna baba cared about my conveniences and food when I used to go there in school holidays. He even drew water from the well and rubbed my back while I took bath on the well or later on tube well. He will arrange a person to give me massage in night when I used to go to bed for sleep. He will keep on talking about the political happenings in the country and even technologies that surprised me many times. Jamuna baba had once visited me in Hindu Hostel when I was in Presidency College. He had come to my grandfather for treatment for his piles. Next time he came along with his personal aid Dukhi accompanied by my mother and a couple of Bodarhi to go for pilgrimage to Ganga Sagar and then to Puri. I arranged them to visit Ganga Sagar by my car. Yamuna accompanied them there and later on to Puri too. Baba was very much impressed by Yamuna and kept on talking about smart way she managed everything in their Puri trip.

I wish I would have done more for him.

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Nano: Disgusting! Shocking!

All these years, I have been seeing the evolution of a reliable quality control and management system that prided me. Auto sector was the leader in making the system fool-proof. While the zero defect concept started with project such as launching of satellites, the mass production required in auto sector made the practices of Total Quality Control or Management (TQC/TQM)getting matured with certifications such as Deming Prize with many other techniques such as Poka Yoke.

But it seems either the evolution of quality system did stop before the maturity or the system installed gets complacent causing the erratic mishap. The engineers and managers will still have to work to find a better way to ensure the reliability that is required with the cars of contemporary design. Another question also requires some pondering. Are the electronics and digital devices integrated the cause or can it be used to avoid the uncertainly or misses leading to mishap?

A brand new Nano catches fire and so also perhaps the brand. The burning Nano above is a dream on fire for at least me, if it is not so for the managers and employees of Tata Motors. How can a company remain complacent with such happening when a new car catches fire and turns into ashes? Will Tata Motors including Mr. Ratan Tata do sufficient to go for damage control before going with global dream? the story appeared few days ago, but the national media din’t publish this. Is something fishy?

I still think it as human failure at some point during design and manufacturing in the make-shift plant of Pantnagar or in workshops of some vendors. Tata Motors had plenty of time courtesy Mamta before launch for checking the design. But the prospective car buyers has the right to know the correct story from the horse’s mouth before taking the plunge in unswum water.

Unfortunately the car manufacturers and its network that extends up to the actual users world over have become insensitive to certain extent. It is pretty clear from a story in New York Times about a ‘Japan I Never Knew.’

Feeling her Toyota Mark X station wagon lurch forward at a busy intersection, Masako Sakai slammed on the brakes. But the pedal “had gone limp,” she said. Downshifting didn’t seem to work either.

Her car surged forward nearly 3,000 feet before slamming into a Mercedes Benz and a taxi, injuring drivers in both those vehicles and breaking Mrs. Sakai’s collarbone.

As shaken as she was by the accident, Mrs. Sakai says she was even more surprised by what happened after. She says that Toyota – from her dealer to headquarters – has not responded to her inquiries, and Japanese authorities have been indifferent to her concerns as a consumer.

Mrs. Sakai says the Tokyo Metropolitan Police urged her to sign a statement saying that she pressed the accelerator by mistake – something she strongly denies. She says the police told her she could have her damaged car back to get it repaired if she made that admission. She declined.

“In Japan, there is a phrase: if something smells, put a lid on it,” said Shunkichi Takayama, a Tokyo-based lawyer who has handled complaints related to Toyota vehicles.

Is not the story appears to be one from India, if the name are made Indian?

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Presidency: From College to University

I don’t know why but I have my own reason of extreme excitement over the Presidency University Act passed by West Bengal assembly recently. The institute originally founded as Hindoo College in 1817 and renamed as Presidency College in 1855, is getting an upgradation as University. I am among that huge lot of living alumni of Presidency College who can’t excuse the left government that did everything to pull down the College from its top position to a mediocre level. Many parents shied and eminent teachers deserted because of excessive government intervention. Fortunately, the left failed. Presidency College continued to retain its unique place.

Unfortunately, I don’t know why Presidency College or now Presidency University, the institute of excellence in Kolkata can’t employ the best teachers from all over the country and open it for the competitive admission for students from all over the country. I wish the states and the centre would have agreed to make all the best colleges in different capital cities as cosmopolitan as IITs and IIMs. It would have certainly enhanced its brand.

Presidency College with limited land space to grow will have to go out of the present location or will have to take the route of extension centres in different location. But I dream the birth of the innovation university with the new transformation of Presidency College to Presidency University. Can it have a separate college of each science subject, such as one College of Physics with offering of courses providing courses for honours bachelor degree to conducting post doctoral researches? Similar separate colleges can come up for different subjects, even of vernacular or foreign languages and other subjects in humanities. I am ready to share and expand my proposal with any educationist who can agree with me. Can the media help me in selling the idea of re-engineering of this new type of university?

However, the old building of the college with a history of its own and the Eden Hindu Hostel must be declared as heritage building and maintained for the posterity.

But I doubt if the new university can get the necessary autonomy and freedom to raise fund and decide and administer every academic aspect of educational courses. Otherwise, the Presidency University will remain under the state government and ruling political party that carry on its own political agenda.

I suggest the Presidency University to get benefited through all those who had been associated with this great old institute anytime in life as student or faculty. But still initiative will remain with those who shall be running its administration. Who shall be bringing the change?

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Quality Schooling: Sibal’s Dream Solutions

Perhaps one of the best presentations in India Today’s Conclave 2010 was from Mr. Kapil Sibal, the lawyer by profession but who appears to present himself as the best education reformist India ever got. (Those interested must click for the speech transcript in box)

However, I am hardly convinced about the possibility of speedy implementation of Kapil’s wishes to provide rightful access to every kid of the country to quality education. India still lives in rural India. At least 60 percent of the children in age up to 14 years go to the rural schools that are nothing but few rooms of all specifications with no facilities built in a desolate location outside the villages.

Kapil wishes to ensure quality through infrastructure by setting out minimum infrastructural laws–pupils to teacher ratio. A school ‘should have a playing field, and a classroom of certain dimensions. In the event of particular institutions not having so, a three-year period will be given to the institution to arrange for it. And comply with the norms under the Act.’ It appears to be an impossible task for the state government or the panchayats that are expected to play a definitive role in school administration.

Unfortunately, the rural schools never followed any norms of building design and architecture. Overall condition of schools on average is just pitiable.

I wish each state decides few conceptual designs and specifications for the primary, and secondary schools. I also suggest that all rural secondary school must integrate a skill training wing. Every student must compulsorily learn at least one skill. But the first important task is to prepare an architecturally sound but low cost building design with clear specifications and drawings of various types of school campus to be built. The design must be aesthetic matching with the rural environment preferably modular, so that the building work can be taken up in phases as the school grows in scale and activities. The infrastructure must include creativity centres, laboratories for language and mathematics with computers and other digital gadgets. At some stage a meeting hall may come up. But the campus must have a playground and also a gardening corner where children can grow plants and flowers. It should also have provision for residence of a caretaker teacher and a guard who should be responsible for the buildings and other assets in the campus.

How will it be excuted? There is only one way to make this happen. The main initiative must come from panchayats and the governing body that must be headed by a retired qualified person with missionary zeal selected by the villagers through consensus. The panchayat must be free to use local labour under NAREGA to cut the cost of building. As first task, the existing school must be connected with the village with 24×7 lighted metalled road with plantation on both sides. The school should be allowed to take donations from the alumni or local donors to improve the facilities.

In short, the rural school campus must grow as a showpiece of the community in cluster with panchayat bhawan, knowledge centre or kiosk that is being planned by the government, and the healthcare centre in proximity rather than having each of them in separate locations as is the practice now at least in Bihar.

I don’t know how Mr. Sibal dreams of broadband and last mile connectivity to compliment the shortage of good teachers, when 90 percent of the rural schools are vulnerable for pilferage of even the doors and windows and when the solar plant installed on a panchayat bhawan is taken away by thieves in the night, and when the schools are used by thieves for planning their next victims in night or for celebrating the success of a big prey or to accommodate the marriage party in summer for afternoon break after a long journey to its destination.

Majority of the rural schools at least in Bihar, as much as I know, are in real bad shape with not even a single regular teacher to manage the affairs there. In some places, even the good high schools that I knew years ago hardly have few students with very few teachers with little qualification and no motivation for teaching.

How will Kapil Sibal’s dream get realized? How will the country growth be sustained without good education for the majority of the population?

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प्रभात पाण्डेय की लम्बी कविता ‘उमराव जान’

मैं कविता समालोचक नहीं हूँ, न ही साहित्य का मर्मज्ञ | पर बचपन से कविता में रुचि है, कविता पढ़ना अच्छा लगता है| शायद यह कविता प्रेम विद्यालय में प्रार्थना से प्रारम्भ हुआ, चौक-चंदा गाने में व्यवहृत हुआ, और अंत्याक्षरी से समृद्ध बना| बिरलापुर के स्कूली दिनों में ही भारत भारती, प्रिय प्रवास, साकेत, रश्मि रथी, कामायनी और बहुत सारी कविता पुस्तकों को पढ़ा| कितना समझा मालूम नहीं, पर पढ़ना अच्छा लगता था | अकेले में जोर-जोर से भी पढ़ता था और दादी को भी सुनाता था, भले हीं उन्हें कुछ ना समझ आता हो| कभी कभी तो वे झल्ला भी उठती थीं|

प्रेसीडेंसी कालेज और आई. आई. टी., खडगपुर में तो किताबें नहीं मिलीं, पर साप्ताहिक धर्मयुग और अन्य पत्रिकाओं के माध्यम से कविता का साथ रहा, पढ़ता रहा और कविता प्रेम बना रहा| हिंद मोटर में काम करते तो अपने ही खरीदना था| ख़रीदा और पढ़ा भी मनबहलाव के लिए जब तक यमुना नहीं आईं थीं | दिनकर की ‘कुरुक्षेत्र’ और ‘उर्वशी’ बहुत भाती रही, बच्चन की ‘मधुशाला’, ‘मिलनयामिनी’ और ‘नीरज की पाती’ को तो यमुना के आने पर समय समय पर उनको भी सुनाता रहा|

एक महाकबि तो हरदम ही साथ रहे| तुलसीकृत रामचरितमानस का पता नहीं कब मासापरायण प्रारम्भ किया था, शायद तीस साल या उससे भी पहले, और आज भी चल रहा है| गाँव में एक रामायण यज्ञ कर इसकी पूर्णाहूति कराना चाहता हूँ| अब सत्तर पार करने के बाद यही सहारा है और कुछ समय भी कट जाता है| शायद मुक्ति भी मिल जाये| और कबिताई में तुलसी बाबा का कहाँ मुकाबला|

पर इसी बीच अपने हीं स्वजन प्रभात पाण्डेय की लम्बी कविता पुस्तक ‘उमराव जान’ के बारे में सुना| फिर उसे प्रकाशक से मंगाया और तबसे पढ़ता रहता हूँ खाली समय में , क्योंकि अच्छी लगती है|

तुम्हारी कब्र पर जाकर
मैं उदास नहीं हुआ
खुश भी नहीं |

चुपचाप देखता रहा
नहर का पानी
जिसका बहाव रूका-रूका
और
झुका-झुका हरसिंगार
तुम्हारे सिरहाने|
……
तनिक सच-सच बतलाना तो उमराव जान
क्या तुम्हें प्यास नहीं लगा करती इन दिनों |

और अच्छा लगा पाण्डेय जी द्वारा उमराव जान के साथ सीता और अम्बपाली की ब्यथा का समावेश, शायद कुछ इसका विरोध भी करें| पर कविता की दुनिया में संकरीं गलियों नहीं होतीं |

इसी लक्ष्मण टीले पर
रूका था लक्ष्मण का रथ
झंझावातों के बीच..

गंगा का फूट-फूट कर रोना
लहरों का टूट-टूट कर बिखरना
बिलखना बूँद-बूँद घटाओं का
बिलखना पेड़-पौधों-लताओं का
क्या धरती – क्या आकाश
व्याकुल-विह्वल बाहुपाश
सीता की खातिर
सब उदास
सब उदास

और अब अम्बपाली की छटा –

लहराता वैशाली का सभागार
लटक-लटक रंग-रंग की पताकाएं
मस्त-मगन होकर लहराएँ
लहराएँ पुत्र बलपतियों के
लहराएँ पुत्र धनपतियों के
लहराएँ वैशाली का जनपद
अम्बपाली को नगरबधू का पद |
…
….
तुमने देखा तो उमराव जान
हतप्रभ सब के सब
अम्बपाली ने जब
नगरबधू होना तो स्वीकारा
पर वज्जीसंघ के रिवाज को सरेआम धिक्कारा |
उसके अंग-अंग कम्पन
रूप-यौवन पर यह कैसा बंधन
कैसा गणराज्य
कैसी सरकार
कहलाये जो नगरवधू
वहीँ बीच बाजार |

और फिर

तनिक करीब जब हुआ तुम्हारी कब्र के
बांध टूट से गए तमाम सब्र के
देखा वहां तो
महज पत्थरों का था हुजूम
चुपचाप उनके नीचे दबी पड़ी थी तुम
जिस्म दाहिना तुम्हारा
उस पर से वो सड़क
या खुदा!
दिल तुम्हारा कभी रहा था धड़क |

पूछा तो
कुछ न बोला
सिरहाने का हरसिंगार
शाखों से टपका दिए उसने
फूल दो-चार ।

या खुदा, जाने क्यों तुम कुछ को क्यों इतना दर्द देते हो । पता नहीं उमराव जान कैसे सही होगी सब| पर उसकी व्यथा पाण्डेय जी की जबानी कितनी दिलों को दुखायेगी, रुलाएगी और तुम फिर भी वैसे ही करते जावोगे उमराव जानों के साथ | और हम कुछ न कुछ बहाना बनाके अपनी बिद्व्ता बघारते हुए तुम्हें बचाते रहेंगें|

मुझे कविता पाठ का पुराना शौक है और कबिताई का भी| इसका प्रारम्भ स्कूल में हुआ, प्रतियोगिता के द्वारा| कभी कभी आजकल भी कुछ लिखता हूँ स्वांत:सुखाय, क्योंकि लिख कर आनंद पाता हूँ | शायद मेरे संस्कृत शिक्षक भट्टाचार्य जी का मुझे विज्ञान धारा में न जाने की सलाह कहीं ठीक थी | जहां एक तरफ इंजीनियरिंग और मैनेजमेंट के विषयों पर अपने अनुभवों को लिखता रहा, पर कभी हिंदी में कुछ छपाने का प्रयास नहीं किया| काव्यप्रेम काव्य-पुस्तकों को खरीदने और पढ़ने तक सीमित रहा| मानसिक रूप से थकने के बाद अकेले में या पत्नी के साथ उसका आनंद ले पाता हूँ यही क्या कम है|

पाण्डेय जी की कविता में उर्दू शब्दों की बहुतायत है पर पढ़ने में बहुत आनंद आता है | बड़ा नाजुक और भावुक व्यक्तित्व भी है उमराव जान का|

उमीद है पांडेयजी की कबिता यात्रा चलती रहेगी| भगवान उन्हें लम्बी उम्र दें, यश दें|

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